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by readthenotes1
581 days ago
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"suddenly' in this example has a polarized value. as an adverb observation it inserts the writer into the story, which either has tremendous meaning, or literally none at all. I would even say that the second example has a more masculine voice than the first because the "trouble began suddenly" usage is careless, non-commital, and low risk." It does not sound masculine to me whatsoever. It just sounds awkward. Suddenly, the trouble began...
The trouble suddenly began... Each sound more normal to me with the second one being the more natural |
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