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by skulk 590 days ago
It's definitely a matter of taste. The first version has flavor, the second is flat. The first reminds me of the style of writing that got me hooked on MUDs.
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We were actually considering a MUD at first, but then we added raylib
Yeah, agree. "Jolted" is not as evocative as "stirred".