[wongarsu]

It doesn't get much better if you translate that paragraph from corpo speak to normal language: "We did the upgrade step by step. We did each step in batches. After we already decided how we were going to upgrade the clusters but before actually doing it we asked the teams responsible for keeping the clusters running for their opinion. This helped create an environment where we work together and helped monitoring the process"

I'm sure there are people who write like that. LLMs have to get it from somewhere. But that part especially is mostly empty phrases, and the meaning that is there isn't all that flattering

[Groxx]

People write like that to sound good to higher-ups who don't understand what's going on underneath.

There's A LOT of that kind of content to learn from. A brief glance at LinkedIn is all you need.