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by rudasn
616 days ago
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Hey. The landing page is unclear on what the product is or what it actually does. What does craft your own mentors mean? I'm not sure your target audience (educators, parents?) are having that problem. "Oh, if I could just craft my own mentors these kids would learn so much more" - doesn't make any sense. The stock/ai/filler photos aren't helpful either. I'm thinking "what's that" instead of "oh, it does that too, nice!". Maybe you need to be more clear, explit and upfront about what this product does in the language your target audience is actually currently using. Having the video embedded on the page, as opposed to having to click a button, would also probably work best. Easier for interested users, and less clutter for prospects leaving just one call to action, "Try now". |
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