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by kayo_20211030
626 days ago
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I feel the piece would have worked better backwards. Lead with the outcome that she wasn't found. Move through the effacement of the minor players (and potentially major contributors - the most interesting part). Close on the asking of how and why this happens. (Even the elimination of footsteps by falling snow could have been worked through it as a stronger metaphor) |
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