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I agree that permission requests should include sufficient context -- but I think that paragraph is way too long for the purpose. People do not read unexpected dialog text. I'd save that for the App Store description, when people are more receptive to detail.

For the permission request, I'd condense your paragraph into a sentence or two.

It's not unusual to download an app, but not launch it immediately. Demanding that the user remember your App Store description is unfair. It's your baby, not theirs.

They might not launch your app for hours or days after downloading. And Apple, reasonably I think, wants developers to try harder to accommodate user's realities.