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by dyauspitr
697 days ago
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The first sentence leads me to imagine a torn up painting and a group of people clustered around it. The second sentences leads me to imagine a large gallery space with high ceilings with a smattering of people in front of one of the paintings. Both ways have their pros and cons. Describing the space first lets the reader paint a setting for the eventual object of interest. |
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