[omneity]

Pretty whimsical but confusing and borderline creepy, especially the deepfakes and voice cloning without permission. One more thing caught my attention.

> all the [...] poverty of us

Given all the apparatus, robot dog, iPad per delivery ... I don't think we share the same definition of poverty.

[1ikigai]

Thank you for the feedback! We completely depleted the remaining savings we had into this ''campaign'' (I know, stupid) and interesting part about IPads is that most of the recipients just return the tablets, so we were able to reuse them on each delivery. They also were acquired used off the marketplaces, of course. It's later that we learned majority of these companies have ''no valuable gifts'' policy where they must return things like these.

I agree with you, though. Probably too strong of the word to be used and I should reconsider its usage.

[omneity]

Interesting bit about the gift policy, thank you for sharing. "Limited resources" might be a more appropriate term.

Good luck!

[1ikigai]

Thank you!

Changed the sentence to: ''Upon being inspired by all the power of London and misery of us''

I think it's better. Thank you again for the feedback! Really appreciate that.