[jncfhnb]

Personally I think the article tackles too many things which is a bit frustrating if any of the threads are interesting but it’s your article

I thought it was interesting

[deliveryboyman]

Thanks for the feedback.

Do you mean I’m not expanding on these threads deep enough? Instead, it feels like everything is a summary I suppose.

Just trying to learn how I can write these posts better.

[jncfhnb]

Pick one concept and talk about that concept.

I see at least three perspectives here:

* business / marketing

* level design

* technical implementation

Do only one of those concisely and completely. And if you want to do all three, make it three articles.

[deliveryboyman]

Got it. Thanks for taking the time to help me with this!