[jjj123]

Honestly, I found it super interesting and the tone worked for me. It’s a comprehensive summary of the poison that is engagement and metrics above all else development.

But I will say the tone makes me stop short of sending this to my parents, who actually need to be swayed (whereas I don’t).

So if your goal is to be interesting and informative to people who are already on your side, you did well. That’s a worthy enough goal imo.