[satvikpendem]

You need more information on the "What makes Onigiri unique?" section because I don't see any features that aren't already in (or are better than) other invoicing solutions. Hone in on the pain point because saying you're indie is a nice-to-have, not a pressing desire for most I'd say.

[kimelnick]

Yeah. I would say I should simplify LP even more and make it more straightforward though