[chmike]

I don't feel this is a good presentation. Text is too small in many places. The solution is not made obvious from the graphic.

What I found original and nicely intuitive is the way to show fragmentation of the playground field. But it is missing a clear view (in a snap) of the cause of this fragmentation. Because the next slide is supposed to explain how to solve the problem.

Making critics is very easy, making the art is very difficult.