[musHo_sk]

Man, sorry, I give up.

[pselle]

Idan's talking about this still being up:

"All concepts and screens looks great when you insert pics of models [strike]& nice girls[/strike], so here comes a part of my secret sauce:"

There may be others I didn't catch. Thanks for fixing some of it, it stops the copy from distracting from the content.

[idan]

Don't give up, don't be sorry—just fix it!

Bonus: you learned something about writing copy for startups today. Every failure is an opportunity for a successful outcome.

[jeffclark]

It's OK to show some personality. It's even OK to offend some people sometimes.

Correction: he learned something about writing copy for idan today.

[mnicole]

No, Idan's point was incredibly valid and I'm glad that the creator cared enough to make efforts to fix it.