[getwiththeprog]

I like the motivation. I do not think the 'story' adds to the goal you seek to achieve.

The characters you have invented would suit a picture book. Yet the math and concepts you offer suit an older teen or adult.

Think again about your audience, and either offer a very simple and well explained text for upper teens, or a really dumbed down picture book for primary school.

Keep with it, go iteratively to seek regular feedback. Put it on Tik-Tok or some place you can reach out to the target audience.

[yawl]

At very beginning I want to do it in comic style, kinda like “beast academy” style. But my art skill sucks, and ai image generator is not as good as I hoped. So I settled with chapter book, at least something I can produce. May be I should go game style "book" to be able to reach younger readers.