[politelemon]

I'm struggling to understand and even read this. The author ought to be using headings instead of so many bullet points, which are meant for a tight group of short related points, not paragraph separators.

But trying to look past that I'm still failing to understand that this is about it what you're meant you be doing.

[hexo]

Maybe you aren't target demographics or something else. I have no problem reading and understanding it. This is condensed, information rich text that I find way better than 15 pages pages of noncontent. I dont understand your point about headings - you mean headings-only text is more readable than bullets?

[interstice]

At a guess author uses one of those nested list note taking apps