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by Keeeeeeeks
855 days ago
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> All these “we” statements should be “me” statements. And all of your sentences ought to have "I think that" at the beginning; while reading OPs message as a sign of victimhood instead of a statement of fact gives you the opportunity to sharpen your sense of self against it, it gives the appearance of signaling more than it gives actionable advice. otoh, if the former was your goal, I misread intent. |
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Hard to argue with the last line though. Many people become victims of society through their own inaction.