[bryantgillespie]

Thanks! Exactly the type of feedback I was after.

You feel it's the joke / script that needs tightening? or the actual delivery?

[jfengel]

The delivery pace is dictated by the format. I might tighten it a bit but it's effectively doing the thing it's aiming for.

Which means that the text needs to be tightened within an inch of its life. That's tricky to do right.

[bryantgillespie]

Agreed. Thanks for clarifying.