[bobbydavid]

Congrats, looks like a cool app.

My first thought is "why do I need this?" Your site doesn't answer that for me.

The intro video certainly sells me that it's cool, so that I am trying hard to think of a reason that I need this "note-taker". Then I think... note taking? These are made to look so fancy. Am I showing these notes to other people? Are these notes for myself? Why do I care how pretty my own notes look?

I conclude either (a) I'm just not someone who needs beautiful notes when I'm jotting things down, or (b) I'm missing something about what the product is for. Either way, I decide not to buy.

And speaking of buy, I would like the BUY button at the top to be emphasized more, rather than carrying the same weight as the "T" icon on the left. Also, when I scroll down to the bottom, I'd like the page to conclude with another BUY button. If you sell me while I'm scrolling down, are you really going to make me scroll back up to buy?

[luke5dm]

Interesting. I will definitely add the buy button at the bottom, and make the top one larger. That's a very good suggestion.

As for the app itself, it's a little weird because I think the real power of it lays in the way it organizes your notes, and gives you quick access to anything you want. When showing it to people however, it was the autocomplete and somewhat the beautiful design that created the "wow" effect. So with that said, I'm still not sure what the best sales pitch should be.

[bobbydavid]

Glad to help :-)

Personally, I would drop "Powerful Shortcuts" and "Convenient Both Ways" as neither one adds much for me. The first seems obvious -- not like a cool feature. The second just makes me nervous -- are you likely to forget implementing the use of the mouse?

That might give you room to include some sample uses. Or direct improvements on my life. Something that's less focused on how great your product is, and more focused on how great my life will be when I buy it.