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by gwillis13
5193 days ago
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As others have already commented, too much text. The issue isn't really "too much" text, but the way your conveying that text is boring and mundane. If your going to give "bulletin point synopsis" of information. Make it enticing to read, or simplify your approach all together. Great design is always impacting, and straight to the point.
Your a website you have a limited window of capturing one's attention. |
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