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by tailspin2019
1013 days ago
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It comes across as a bit “wordy” hence maybe triggering some people’s AI “spidey senses” - including mine originally! So perhaps more editing was needed, to distill the message. If English is not your first language then it’s pretty damn good in that context :) |
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I'll try to work on making my writing more concise, based on the comments here.