[dnh44]

You misread the comment you responded to; OP agrees with you.

> without any plot fundamentals that felt like a deep betrayal to the universe.

There should be a comma between “fundamentals” and “that”

[Jagerbizzle]

I believe it should have actually been a semicolon.

[dnh44]

It would have read a lot nicer with the semicolon and also if “that” were changed to “this”