[amflare]

Its an entry to an essay contest. He probably didn't expect more than the judges and probably his mother to read it.

[deadbeeves]

Okay, but it's posted here, so the GP's reaction is not unwarranted. If it was not meant to be seen by anyone other than those people then it shouldn't have been posted.

[wouldbecouldbe]

No but it's unnecessarily mean; especially considering it's written by a kid.