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by tmpX7dMeXU
1045 days ago
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Nice writing style. Straight to the point because the author actually had something useful to say. A nice departure from the usual ‘pad it out’ approach that sadly you even see people take for their personal writing. So many people will lament recipe authors including 6 paragraphs of preamble, but will happily do it when they’re telling you about how they pwned their toaster or whatever. When it gets down to brass tacks, I.e. the technical details section, it could really do with a once-over. One too many run-on sentences. |
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