[akshayshinde7]

I think you're being sarcastic. I think for me the more interesting bit is that there are 2 parts to creating something. Generation and Curation, I think this story goes to show that Llms will do the same thing to writing . Humans will become curators and AI will take care of low level generation. I can imagine a lot of things, but putting them in words is something that I'm not good at. Now thanks to Llms I can also put my thoughts out there.

I shall definitely try this 'avoid turgid prose', 'make the plot interesting.

[utucuro]

The trick to getting better at putting things into words, is to read more. Particularly, read those whose writing style you would seek to emulate. For this particular case, both the structure of the story and the writing style have room for improvement. I would suggest taking a look at Isaac Asimov, specifically his short stories, Mark Twain, Ernest Hemingway, Stephen King and Oscar Wilde.