[sweetjuly]

I give you this feedback with respect and to help you become a better internet commenter, because I believe you are capable of substantially more:

This is an incredibly rude and insulting way to give feedback. There is no reading of this that's kind or charitable, don't tell people their work is the "product of a child" and how you "can't overstate how poorly constructed [their] post is".

But, thankfully, you can learn to improve! Try to avoid insulting the author and their work. Instead, just try to offer actionable suggestions on how to improve.

[Zetice]

Let’s hope they’re better at taking feedback than you are on their behalf.