You're awesome. I did stuff like this when I was 14, but didn't have the skill to write about it (and still don't) due to autism. But on the other paw, your article seems really well-written!
It's because I have to express concepts in a certain way, and it doesn't usually flow very naturally. It usually sounds really serious or insensitive. When writing articles, my perceived tone is just really boring, because of the way I have to explain things. My words come out weird and the "sorry, I'm a native speaker" is real.