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by roenxi
1176 days ago
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The issue I see here is you are doing a worse job at this than ChatGTP. Creating idioms is hard, that is why we left most of them to Shakespeare. - I regularly return cereal to its box. - "helium" and "balloon" have a more awkward rhythm than "confetti" and "cannon". It also loses the connotations of sudden, explosive and exciting change. - Snow & globe I'm not even sure what that means in practice. It has poor prospects as an idiom. Is the snow even known for leaving globes? |
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Not only that, but "the confetti has left the cannon" is an alliteration, which makes the phrase even more poetic.