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That's a fair point!

I guess the most searing part of the film, in my memory, is the first / middle thirds of the movie. But maybe I only remember the first two thirds because it's balanced so effectively by the ending. :D

I'd watch your movie, but I agree it'd probably be criticized as boring because the anti-hero doesn't "develop". Maybe it'd be better if you focus on their childhood/adolescence, i.e. the experiences that sparked the intent to crush their own humanity. Godfather 2 vibes.