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by Gordonjcp 1223 days ago
Someone needs to tell that Erik Baker that using lots of big words doesn't make you sound clever, it just makes you sound like a smartarse 15-year-old trying to impress their English teacher.
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It didn't seem excessive to me. "pusillanimous" stuck out, but apart from that it seemed like fairly normal prose.
> First there was the fire, the smoke billowing infernally into the Appalachian night. It just kept burning. Days of insatiable flame. A black pillar of fumes took up residence above the town like an inert tornado. At its heart, we learned, was the corpse of a train, fifty cars off the rails

To me, even Shakespeare’s Richard III didn’t begin with this level of overly flowery poetic structure.

The text read like an inert tornado.
That’s some doubleplusgoodthink. Having more words for concepts leads to crimethink, ante-vapourisation.