[_boffin_]

lol been doing this for the past few weeks. You can't just use a simple single shot method here. it needs to be refined with your own personality, writing style, and more.

This stuff will get you somewhat there, but won't go the entire distance.

A few things i like doing

- decrease wordage

- increase readability

- make pointed

- "I don't like the following: '...', change it out for one of the following, provide examples"