| This was hard to read, I mean that about the actual readability of the article not the content. Here's my constructive criticism and simple css fixes. The paragraphs need some line-height, it seems too much like a heavy wall of text, space it out a little. .entry p {line-height: 1.5em;} Black on white is hard to read for too long, something slightly less black can help. .entry p {color: #222222;} Maybe it's because of the way it renders on a Mac but that font isn't the best for long text. I'd keep it simple and just stick with sans-serif. .entry p {font-family: sans-serif;} before: http://i.imgur.com/JCYTF.png after: http://i.imgur.com/nerMb.png just flip between them a few times in separate tabs Hope I'm not stepping on any toes, just trying to help. |
