[jonnyscholes]

I like the idea, and the general construct looks good and the picture works well. But there are too many fonts in the text area [the white one is especially eye bleed worthy]. And the wording is a bit hard to get around. It should be really easy to read - i shouldnt have to put commas in and change the tense of a word for it to make sense... Also i feel the whole page is a bit dull, either the text box needs brightening up or the background image. Interesting service idea, i look forward to seeing where it goes!

[vkkan]

I will try to fix it as soon as I can and will let you know