[ThinkBeat]

>System76 first decided to develop an OS as a way to better shape our customers’ >experiences and harmonize the software with our hardware

I dont like people saying that they have "developed an OS" when all they have done is to create derivative distribution of Ubuntu which itself rests on Debian.

How about:

""" We have created a great distribution of Linux and we have added some brand-new components to it and we think you will really like it.

We think it is the best distribution for our customers and a great distribution for new users

Since it is based upon the highly popular Ubuntu distribution a lot of experienced users will feel right at home as well. """

I hope their work on (a fork?) of GNOME becomes great.

The bit about implementing NTP seems odd to me.