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by foothebar
1369 days ago
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Yes, like said. Also I did not see your first draft of writing before. First which comes to my mind when seeing it: It seems you are not referencing any existing work of scientists, which will be a large caveat for many, because that is like science works – enhance what others have done, prove your starting or side points of your arguments by citing what others found, do not do everything from scratch.
Don't write about what you think something is like (e.g. NN), but prove it is like that by citing the right sources, which you have read. |
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Mostly I just want someone to read my paper because the ideas are rather startling to me, but I don't know if this has been done before. If it's original work I think there are important reasons to have it published so everyone can read it at once, which is explained in the paper. But I may be completely off base.
To the extent that the lack of citation invalidates the conclusions of the paper? I don't know. I think that Korzybski's attitude towards maps, and several other areas where academics have been building on incorrect ideas (such as the theory of interest or that this would necessitate a Marxian dialectic in opposition), mean that original research need be done without necessarily building off of recent research.
Again, super ambitious paper. I could be entirely wrong.