[variousbagels]

This might be a great article and I wouldn't even know it. I can't get past the first few sentences because it is thoroughly riddled with typos, missing capitalizations, and other careless errors that would've been fixed if this post wasn't written free-thought and was re-read before publishing.

Try presenting yourself professionally online. Often times what you say is just as important as how you say it.

[j_camarena]

Thanks for the feedback :)!... I'm still reading and fixing typos .. but i was finishing the Spanish version of my article first.

Also, my English is not pretty good because is not my primary language.

[variousbagels]

I apologize that that came off as rude. Your English is a lot better than my Spanish.

[j_camarena]

no problem, i already fixed some of the typos :).

[Mz]

I’ts true?. Do i need to diversify my startup? Or its a better idea to put all the eggs in one basket?.

Should be (or at least a better version, not promising it's perfect):

Is it true? Do I need to diversify my startup? Or is it a better idea to put all my eggs in one basket?

(Feel free to copy and paste if you can't tell what I did different.)

best of luck

[j_camarena]

thanks

[Mz]

No problem. But you missed a detail: You still have a period after a question mark at the end of that paragraph. The period should be removed.

Take care.