[plam503711]

A spectre silently fixed the spelling, thanks for the feedback ;)

[ClassyJacket]

I see you fixed rewrite as well, just as I was getting ready to point it out :P

[plam503711]

Yes, sorry for that, I was really more focused on getting the story details than the spelling (plus I'm not a native speaker as you probably guessed).

[mmastrac]

It wasn't obvious at all when reading - your written English is excellent. Only after revisiting and re-reading more carefully I noticed you used the construction "So ...." slightly more than a native speaker would have.

Thanks for the great article.

[plam503711]

Thank you, both for being kind and also providing a constructive feedback. "So" is very common trap for French speakers :D