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by gord
6469 days ago
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I scanned this, was about to click-onwards, then read - "Instant Real-time price negotiation resulting in Instant Gratification for consumer"
I think that is the one line gotcha.. it seems an obvious thing to build a new product around.So, maybe just lead with that ? Can it be optimized further...
"Realtime price negotiation means Instant Gratification for buyer and seller" .. keep working it, it'll fly. gord. |
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