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by stripline
1425 days ago
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Great reply. I agree that the writing in the post is excellent. While we're giving constructive feedback I'd add this sentence: > I cover tech here in Brazil for +10 years and run a +9 years old independent, It should be past tense "I've covered", and in English we do everything backwards so 10+ and 9+ are more natural. So I'd change that to: I've covered tech here in Brazil for 10+ years and run a 9+ years old independent, |
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