[gfavvas]

I don't think "We take your property and put it in the cloud" means anything tangible to a property owner. (Making it easier to find tenants and collect payments are tangible benefits.)

I would also have more detail on what exactly the product does without requiring the user to sign up. Some screenshots of use cases of how you can help me would be beneficial.

[snaveint]

Thanks for the advice, I'll take that onboard and see what else we can come up with for the first slide - what you have said makes sense.