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by pagutierrezn 1463 days ago
"We need to vary the lengths of our sentences. Sometimes short. Sometimes long."
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The comment was a "yes, and" not a "no, but"
Yes, and the hyperlink for "vary the lengths of our sentences" in the linked-to essay goes to another essay, by the same author - https://sive.rs/book/WritingTools - which includes that Gary Provost "tour de force".