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by blackshaw
1473 days ago
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> replace every “and then” transition with a “and that’s why” or “and despite that” transition The creators of South Park give the same advice for writing fiction: every two beats in your story should be linked not by an "and" but by a "but" or "therefore". https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vGUNqq3jVLg |
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