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by dlandis
1489 days ago
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I'm not familiar with this situation, but this is such an immaturely written post. For example, the third bullet point in the summary is: > On March 1, 2022, Stanford student Katie Meyer died by suicide. During that time, Dean Caldera was running a raffle for her side consulting business. What is the writer trying to imply, exactly? Are they suggesting that there is something inappropriate about the raffle? Or was the timing of raffle inappropriate? Or was it the consulting business itself that was improprietous? If you have a point to make, just plainly state it, and then back it up with facts. Don't make vague innuendos and try to lead the reader to make connections that don't exist. No one has time for that. |
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The consulting business in improprietous. The raffle was inappropriate. All of this is inappropriate.