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by words_and_signs
1522 days ago
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This is wrong. It's a good rule of thumb because passive voice can be a common indicator of weak writing, but it has plenty of good uses in strong writing. The best case to apply it is when the object of a sentence was previously a subject or other focus of prior sentences, and so is more familiar to the reader than the subject of the new sentence. For example: "The United States had maintained neutrality until 1941. However, it was attacked at Pearl Harbor, and then chose to enter the war." |
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I'd say active is still better here.