[99112000]

I really enjoyed it but I think you can do better.

You did a really awesome job on the script, like really, but you lack animations and footage while talking.

Cut more often to other footage while talking over it, I don't hate your face but illustrations of what you're talking about would help increase viewer attention.

Generally, spend more time on the post-production and editing and afd more animations to explain what you are talking about!

[NicoJuicy]

He has done a lot of work with animations and other things. I don't think you appreciate how much time it takes to do that.

[99112000]

I appreciate his content and the time it took to create it. Perhaps I could have done better at conveying that in my comment.

I want to help him retain viewers attention and the additional animations and graphics while talking will increase that.

If time constraints are an issue, I'd suggest to make the videos shorter but more animated.

The post production work is definitely challenging because it's the final part to finish the video and you wish you could skip it all, but it makes or breaks the content. The vision, ideas and script here is amazing but people learn in different ways and educational content like this is best presented in different formats all at once to suit the learning style of the viewer.

The graphics don't need to be amazing, even simple graphics will do the job.