[raverbashing]

No, even for an engineering slide this is apalling

I'm not so sure how many people are familiar with the term "conservatism" as used here. I'm not. Some might be aware, those who are not aware will just skip over

I read this slide a couple of times. There's no thought order, no connection between the topics (even if we assume people are familiar with the subject) and several typos.

It is not a Powerpoint fault it is a fault of whoever wrote this.

This is an issue with information hierarchy. If this is a risk (and I can't imagine what might have been a bigger risk at that mission) it needs to be brought into attention. Not added to line 4 of slide 7 and be done with it.