[martinkallstrom]

You need to work on your presentation. Replacing "try", "working on", and "if that sounds good to you" would go a long way. Like this:

"I have developed https://subsify.com/ which is a service filling the gap in recurring payemnts for UK and EU business. We currently support SagePay as Payment Gateway, which will fulfill the needs of most people. I would encourage anyone struggling with recurring payments in the UK to get in touch, we will probably be able to help you out."