[benfrain]

I was astonished at the length of that article as I kept reading and thinking the same, ‘isn’t this what he just said before???’ I’m happy to read long-form but I feel that piece would have benefited greatly from substantial editing

[kmelve]

Sorry about that. You won't believe how long the first verison was ;)

[jibalt]

It could also use some editing and running through spell check, like that comment.