[phomer]

The deformations are there on purpose, I was trying to give it an edgy style, otherwise it just doesn't appeal to the audience I am trying to reach.

I fixed the other typos, as there were unintentional, just a byproduct of fast sloppy editing :-) It's writing, and it's an opinion, so I rather get it out there with a few typos, spelling mistakes and bad grammar, then just sit on it forever.

[swombat]

Giving it an edgy style is one thing. Giving birth to an incoherent and pointless rant is another. In this case, I'm afraid you failed and did the second one.