Thanks a bunch for the feedback! Quick question for you: Did you get what our service does/how it works fast enough or did you feel like you had to hunt for it?
I think the story that you told in the other section of the website about the wedding would be ideal. That is something that nearly everyone can relate to, and it makes the value proposition crystal clear. I would put that content front and center.
Yes, I was able to go to "How does it work" and figure it out. Your # 4 Review & order is overlapped where the text "order" and shopping cart image is showing up under # 2 "Setup your book"