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by jfk13
1616 days ago
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Now that I look at the screenshots with "they're mock-ups" in mind, I notice quite a few typos, etc... some careful proofreading would make for a more professional look. E.g. the fake Amazon page has "approvalfor" (missing a space), "orders over %35" (surely that's "$35"), "Flavor: Marshmellow" (should be "a", not "e"), and "Abbout the item". |
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